Thursday, 19 June 2014

The Dungeon

The Dungeon

In a dark island full of secrets I fell into a dungeon! I can see damp walls. Moss everywhere. I see vampire bats waiting for another victim for their meal of blood. I see graffiti, skeletons heads and rusted metal I am scared.

I smell fresh Blood, rusted metal and old water.  You smell a strong vivid smell from the messages from the death! I am shocked scared from the horror. I feel like a trapped animal about to be cut for food. I hope this is a dream I want to wake up now.

I feel moss and blood stains as I lean on the walls. I get tired slowly but I want to stay awake interested in where I will go. I feel rusted metal as I reach for a lever it opened a secret door and had a sign that said !PLACE OF NO RETURN!  

I don't want to die in this undeniable creepiness. I hear wings flapping from vampire bats. Echoes in the darkness. Bones falling from the roof and fish jumping up above water that is 1 meter deep.

I feel that I am and alone someone or something is watching me and I don't like it. I need to get out of here. I am lost! Lost like a cat in a blizzard that is alone. But I am not alone...... I feel if I fall asleep I will never wake up because the bats will suck up all my blood until there is no more!

By Rohan


  1. Hi Rohan,
    I really like how you put lots of detail and how you added a tiny bit of a story into it. How dark was it? What did it look like?

  2. Hello Rohan,
    I really enjoyed reading your story, I liked how you said it was creepy and scary. Could you next time maybe say what the Dungeon looked like?