Monday, 9 November 2015

Persuasive Writing - Sell it!!


Head Umbrella



Are you tired of walking in the rain with your hands full with bags and other junk? Well it's your lucky day - the new, stylish, easy to wear Head Umbrellas are here at last! These strong and durable rain hats come in a range of different colours and sizes - Blue, Pink, Green, there are loads of cool colors to choose from! They go with any outfit. This hands free, innovative, comfortable umbrella, will shelter you from the sun, the rain, and even the wind! Head Umbrellas are made from strong material, which means we can guarantee that there will be no unexpected breaks when you a running around in the wind and rain trying to get to the carpark. To sum that all up, Head Umbrellas are comfy, durable, easy to wear, stylish, great for ages and has great sun, rain and wind protection. Call us in the next 20 minutes and we will provide you with another two Head Umbrellas for free! Yes, that's what I said, Another two head umbrellas absolutely free! Pick up that phone right now a dial 0800 HEAD BRELLIE ( 0800 550 7492) to receive your very own Head Umbrellas with free postage to any part of New Zealand! Call right now because stocks are limited and they are selling out fast! . Don’t delay, get yours today! T’s & C’s apply. Visit www.headbrellie.co.nz for more details on this incredible product. 
By Maya Cosford 


Comfortable ,gigantic and more awesome than ever. It’s that magnificent invention that head umbrella. doesn’t it save your hands from falling of! That umbrella is simple to use and simply awesome. When you come i’ll be waiting i’ll be waiting to give you that beautiful colorful umbrella. It’s 30% of so while it is you better come and get one! Everyone is coming so you better come to. You choose the color so when you get one you’ll be perfectly awesome. Obviously it protects you from the rain. It’s cheap! I know you want to get one. So call now at 0800 umbrella! 
By Megan Silva

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  2. Great writing, How long did it take?

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  5. well done I think your writing is really crafty well done really good writing

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  6. Hi, Maya and Megan. Wow! I love your writing! I know it was a very tricky to write that because I was writing it too. You have done a really great job! Keep it up!

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  7. Hi, Maya and Megan. Wow! I love your writing! I know it was a very tricky to write that because I was writing it too. You have done a really great job! Keep it up!

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  9. I would buy one that's cool

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    1. that was very kind Joya if I was miss morris I would feel happy

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  13. Wow thats cool and awesome i would buy one and its hand free.Has anybody ever seen this?

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  14. Hi Maya and Megan, your writing is very Persuasive it's so Persuasive that I want to buy one now. They also remind me about real adds.
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  15. I think people should start creating this.Don't any of you think?

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    1. There is some made you need to buy one

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  16. Hub 1 the writing is so good I would like to buy one, Would you get one?

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  17. Kia ora Maya and Megan.Excellent writing about head-umbrella’s and very intersting.I might want to buy one!

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  18. Hi, Maya and Megan. Wow! I love your writing! I know it was a very tricky to write that because I was writing it too. You have done a really great job! Keep it up!

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  19. Hi Maya and Megan, your writing is very Persuasive it's so Persuasive that I want to buy one now. They also remind me about real adds.
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  20. Talofa Maya and Megan your writing is amazing, I love your detail as if you were actually selling something. I like how you were able to persuade the person to buy the product. I like how you added a link like it was real. How long did it take you to think of what you were going to write? Would you like to be a salesman when you grow up?

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  21. Kia ora Maya and Megan I have been reading your persuasive writing it's amazing I think that some day you will be great writers! but I think that you already are.

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  22. Kia ora Maya and Megan, your writing are really interesting and persuasive. After reading you persuasive writing I really want to buy the head umbrella!

    From Valery

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  23. Hola Maya and Megan, we really like your advertisement writing. We liked how you told me about the features. When we was reading we actually thought about buying it. It looks really useful. Do you know where we possibly could find it? We would really like to know if it exists and it is selling yet. Have you ever seen an invention more weird than this. If you have can you reply with the picture or the link. We am up to try it. Thank you for the information. By: Georgia and Cooper.

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  24. Hi ,Great job Maya and Megan. This is a fantastic writing. It’s persuading me!. I would buy this!

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  25. Hi, wow that is a very persuasive piece of writing, I love it! Now I sort of want to buy one! And an umbrella hat might actually be quite useful. People should actually start making these.

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  26. Kia ora Maya and Megan, love your piece of writing, that explains why people should buy the umbrella hats.

    From Curie

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  27. Hi!Maya your piece of writing is amazingly enthusiastic and persuasive, it makes me want to call that number right now! The way you describe it makes it sound like an efficient and reliable product.Great Job!

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  28. Great job Megan and Maya I so want to buy one. Maybe you could open up a factory, and sell umbrella hats what do you think?

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  29. Hola Maya and Megan, we really like your advertisement writing. We liked how you told me about the features. When we was reading we actually thought about buying it. It looks really useful. Do you know where we possibly could find it? We would really like to know if it exists and it is selling yet. Have you ever seen an invention more weird than this. If you have can you reply with the picture or the link. We am up to try it. Thank you for the information. By: Georgia and Cooper.

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  30. Great job on your persuasive piece of writing I really like how the writing really persuades the reader. How long did it take you to write this?

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  31. Hi Maya and Megan, the blogpost you made was very well written.I almost thought it was real! I had a urge to call the number, it sounds like a real advertisement.The product looks really efficient and I wish I could get it, you did very well to persuade me into almost buying it good job!

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  32. hi, wow Maya that writing is so good i hope i could write like you i would love to get one of those amazing hats
    Maya do you have one?

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  33. Wow good writing it really was persuasive! I think I should buy this useful and handy headumbrella!

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  34. Wow great writing! That writing really describes me to but the hat umbrella. I wonder what you could do better next time?

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  35. Amazing writing Maya! I like how you persuaded the buyers with different features in the umbrella! Maybe before you share you could proofread to make your writing better.

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  36. You have put good Persuasive text and and Persuasively to the reader

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  37. This must of been great writing for you. I bet it was amazing.Do you think this was good for you persuasive writing?

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  38. I like the way you used persuasive writing in that text, it also made me want to buy a head umbrella too, what's the trick to making your text so persuasive?

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  39. Great writing you guys that was an awesome piece.Can you describe if you had that product?

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  40. I really like your writing Maya and I like how you did one !.

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  41. Wow now I really want a head umbrella now. I really like the way you started and how much adjectives you have in your story. I also liked how persuasive your writing was.

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  42. Hi Maya and Megan. I liked your pieces of writing. In Hub 2 today I started doing the same piece of writing. Are you proud of your pieces of writing.

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  43. Hi Maya and Megan Your writing is really good. You made me want to buy it because the persuasive is so good if I had a phone I would call that number now!. I think that that was a great writing. do you think that someone would actually want it?

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  44. Wow great writing this is a very good I liked the umbrella hat is very cool.

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  45. Persuasive Writing - Sell it!!
    wow Maya I would love to get a Head Umbrella. your punctuation where great . did you now I did a piece of writing about the Head Umbrellas too .

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  46. good work LH1/2 the shake out was cool good job

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  47. wow great writing and this is a great thing like this is a ad but useful

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  48. Wow now I really want a head umbrella now. I really like the way you started and how much adjectives you have in your story. I also liked how persuasive your writing was. You did an amazing job!

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  49. Hi Maya and Megan,
    Your writing is really good. You made me want to buy the product because your writing is so persuasive. If II had a phone I would call that number now!. Do you think that someone would actually want a head umbrella?
    From:Madisyn

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  50. hey hub 1/2 this must of been great writing for you. I bet it was amazing.Do you think this was good for you persuasive writing?

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  51. Hello
    Hub 1/2 great pieces of writing You make me want to buy it. Maybe next time you can include the price next time?
    Keira

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  52. Amazing writing Maya! I like how you persuaded the buyers with different features in the umbrella! Maybe before you share you could proofread to make your writing better.

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  53. Interesting an umbrella you wear on your head it persuades me well I want one. I did the same thing in my hub. Did you enjoy writing the persuasive writing ?

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  54. “Hello megan and maya”. Great writing about the umbrella hat . Great persuasive word I think I might by one some day

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