Love the way your writing creates vivid pictures in my mind. I was proud of the way you confidently shared your writing in our last assembly. You are writers!
What fantastic examples of descriptive writing. You selected your words carefully to paint a picture in our minds. I can't wait to see what you write next.
Love the way your writing creates vivid pictures in my mind. I was proud of the way you confidently shared your writing in our last assembly. You are writers!
ReplyDeleteWhat fantastic writers you guys are!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Isaac :-)
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DeleteThis writing took for ever
ReplyDeleteNice writing guys! I like it a lot it is awesome.
ReplyDeletethanks
ReplyDeleteAmazing writers
ReplyDeleteI am luca.I like it
ReplyDeleteIsaac You Are BEST
ReplyDeleteBy the Way YOU ARE ISAAC!! Anyway nice Joke Lol.
Deletenice writing and nice words and stuff
DeleteWhat good writers
ReplyDeleteI was good but is a bit sort
ReplyDeleteBy the way I AM ISAAC
ReplyDeleteWhat fantastic examples of descriptive writing. You selected your words carefully to paint a picture in our minds. I can't wait to see what you write next.
ReplyDeleteit sounds spooky and scary
ReplyDeleteThis Writing really creates a image in my mind
ReplyDeleteYes Jamie, Your Writing Was AMAZING, So Was Isaac
DeleteToo spooky
ReplyDeleteyeah
ReplyDeleteWow good job guys these storeys sound spookey
ReplyDeleteWhat Amazing writers you guys are! I like it!
ReplyDeleteNice Writing, I like Jamie P's and Isaac S's Account
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing Luca. It was the best out of all the piece's of writing.
ReplyDeletenice work ben
ReplyDeleteI like the spooky story!!!
ReplyDeleteNice writing Ben
ReplyDeletenice writing and nice words and stuff
ReplyDeleteThis writing is very scary.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your spooky storys especially Lucas but i still liked all of yours :)
ReplyDeleteTyran :)
amazing spooky stories i think the best one was thomas .
ReplyDeleteScary!! I would not like to live in that those houses
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