Thursday 10 September 2015

Lipograms

This week for writing, we have been having a go at writing lipograms. A lipogram is a piece of writing that leaves out one or more letters. 

On Wednesday we had a go at writing a description about this picture that omits the letter 'e'. It was a lot tricker than we thought and we all had to think really carefully about what vocabulary we could use. Check out some of the lipograms below!


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Down on the dark bark floor sat a gigantic, wild, sharp toothed black gorilla munching down on bamboo. Soft as a cat, it sat in the grass.
By Keira

A gorilla was calmly munching on a stick of bamboo.
It was as dark as a chip of charcoal and as wild as a lion .
It sat on soft undergrowth, that was growing on the mountain. It had a furry coat.
By Amy

A gigantic gorilla was hanging on a brown bark-covered branch, munching away at bamboo.It’s fur as soft as a cat and as black as midnight.
By Jamie P


1 comment:

  1. Well done guy those were better then mine:)

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