This week for writing, we have been having a go at writing lipograms. A lipogram is a piece of writing that leaves out one or more letters.
On Wednesday we had a go at writing a description about this picture that omits the letter 'e'. It was a lot tricker than we thought and we all had to think really carefully about what vocabulary we could use. Check out some of the lipograms below!
Down on the dark bark floor sat a gigantic, wild, sharp toothed black gorilla munching down on bamboo. Soft as a cat, it sat in the grass.
By Keira
A gorilla was calmly munching on a stick of bamboo.
It was as dark as a chip of charcoal and as wild as a lion .
It sat on soft undergrowth, that was growing on the mountain. It had a furry coat.
By Amy
A gigantic gorilla was hanging on a brown bark-covered branch, munching away at bamboo.It’s fur as soft as a cat and as black as midnight.
By Jamie P
Well done guy those were better then mine:)
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