The Dungeon
In a dark island full of secrets I fell into a dungeon! I can see damp walls. Moss everywhere. I see vampire bats waiting for another victim for their meal of blood. I see graffiti, skeletons heads and rusted metal I am scared.
I smell fresh Blood, rusted metal and old water. You smell a strong vivid smell from the messages from the death! I am shocked scared from the horror. I feel like a trapped animal about to be cut for food. I hope this is a dream I want to wake up now.
I feel moss and blood stains as I lean on the walls. I get tired slowly but I want to stay awake interested in where I will go. I feel rusted metal as I reach for a lever it opened a secret door and had a sign that said !PLACE OF NO RETURN!
I don't want to die in this undeniable creepiness. I hear wings flapping from vampire bats. Echoes in the darkness. Bones falling from the roof and fish jumping up above water that is 1 meter deep.
I feel that I am and alone someone or something is watching me and I don't like it. I need to get out of here. I am lost! Lost like a cat in a blizzard that is alone. But I am not alone...... I feel if I fall asleep I will never wake up because the bats will suck up all my blood until there is no more!
By Rohan
Hi Rohan,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put lots of detail and how you added a tiny bit of a story into it. How dark was it? What did it look like?
Hello Rohan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story, I liked how you said it was creepy and scary. Could you next time maybe say what the Dungeon looked like?