I can see sweaty men playing cricket in the hot sun. I saw someone bowl the ball I thought he would get him out but instead the guy batting hit a six he nearly got caught by the fielder, the guy in the crowd caught it.
I can smell sweaty mean and hot chips. The hot chips smell nice, the sweaty men don't smell nice. I could smell hot dogs too as soon as I smelt them I went straight to get one they were really tasty.
I can feel hard chairs warm hot dogs salty chips. I can feel the sun on my neck I can feel the determination in the players head.
I can hear yelling and screaming annoying whistles and loud sirens. I can hear the ball getting hit by the batter I can hear the ball bouncing after he hit it.
I felt determined for my team to win.
By Brodie
I could really picture your story, sounds, smells, tastes and sight.
ReplyDeleteAre you a cricket fan?
Good job.
Hi Brodie
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained the night and your seances.
but the picture of Eden park is in the rugby game not a cricket game